once..i was like for a boy from a different school..at the same bus stop every monday to friday :)

Aw! That was so cute! Okay, so here's the dish. Minor spelling corrections. That's all. I love it!

This was very sweet and very insightful. Beautiful.

In fact, I'd think about continuing it, since everyone loves a happy ending, wink wink nudge nudge :D.

-Dark.

I like it, and i know it's not much of a comment, but you could do more with it make people love him as much as she loves him.

apologies if you take offence.