this is intense, and I like your style of writing-halting, almost like it's painful for you to write.

great poem:)

powerful piece the tension was great through out and i was hooked to the end. delicious piece.

perfect. this is breathtaking.

"No one is in control,

I feel a spark." Made me sigh and shake my head. Seriously, this is good.

Really cool and intense, captures the essence of the moment. Keep writing.

-D.J Wu

I definitely don't like sadmism & masochism, but I can understand people who do, and I guess this pretty much explains why.