|Reviews for The Underworld vs The Upperworld :Volume One|
| chibilover28 4/28/11 . chapter 2
I just have one problem with... Please fix your format!
| Angel Investor 1/18/11 . chapter 1
You really need a beta reader. The run-on sentences, weird paragraphing and overall bad grammar and spelling make this piece one that is impossible to take seriously. The plot sounds a lot like Shuffle, but that is the least of your concerns. I highly recommend you to get a beta, because you need lots of improvement with your writing.