Hm not bad at all sis it is really good n i can see my name in it as well :)

This is interesting, I love how you appear to be tying two different cultures together, the modern day school/home layout with a more aged culture your characters names - (brought indian names to mind for me), well done especially in a time when old is meeting new (funny isn't it that the old cultures are being referred to as 'New Age')

i like it ((: