|Reviews for ONESHOT Critique my world|
| TheLastFireBender 3/19/11 . chapter 1
this was rlli rlli cute i luvd it
| Brightheart 2/5/11 . chapter 1
the story is nice but the ending seems quite rushed.
i mean they were just strangers.
| BrandiRose 1/25/11 . chapter 1
Very nice beginning to a story, I'm looking forward to reading more. But the kissing part in the very end... seemed a little rushed. I mean, they don't even know each other. :P Other than that, I'm really looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
| je ne veux pas travailler 1/24/11 . chapter 1
Cute story, but I'd be PISSED if I lost my job cause of some guy haha. I like your writing style :)