Leave me at a cliffhanger...again...

Coral? Adam Dekker is a murderer, a pedo, and a destroyer of precious coral?

NO! THE WORLD IS ENDING!

But at least the romance is getting somewhere, lol.

-Dark.

And he comes just in time to save the damsel in distress! :D

Great chapter.

-Dark.

YES! I so want them to end up together! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, an I think you aye doing a awesome job!

PLEASE POST ASAP!

I really like this story. Your character are great and I hope you update soon. I wanna see what happens next!

Stay strong Wren!

Good Chapter!

Okay, ideas, so it doesnt becometoo dark, if thats not what you want...

Im not trying to push in on your story,sorry!

But anyway, She gets stuck at ben's, adam comes because shes in danger, only he didnt kill anyone it was only a heart slowing tranq gun. Lets just pretend they exist xD

You dont have to do this, its only an idea! Its your story, you do whatever the heck you want!

and its a god story :)

I want more! MORE!

I am a little worried about the whole ben thing? I don't know, I hope you post soon!

I like it!

So Adam is a murderer, huh?

What were those guys try'na do, anyway?

Oh and Adam should look like a bad emo boy, but more emo than bad, I think.

Update soon please.

BAD BOY!:D (In response to the question at the top)

But... how could you seperate the two? I mean, I get how she'd be scared if Adam killed a guy, but he better find her soon... right?

noes?

-Dark.

Um...

TWO CHAPTERS? TWO!

YES!

Love eet.

But I still don't know how old Adam is! Or Wren, for that matter.

Update soon please :D

gASP! OH NOES!

Adam better come back soon. O_o

-Dark.