Wow... just wow... your writing style really improved alot! This is starting to be one of those stories that grips you in it's hold all the way to the last page and leaves you sitting in silence when it's done, unsure of how to return to your normal life, because of how amazing it was... I can't wait until the next chapter, this is a job well done...

Grtz Silencia

Very dark but for some reason I was compelled to keep reading. You're quite a good writer, sentence flow is great. The concept was different and it was an interesting read while the ending leaves a few questions which is probably a good thing.