"Wash the earth with sulfur tears

So nothing grows for 60 years" - my favorite rhyming line.

i love the tune of this and you sing so purty. and you are adorable!

The summary drew me in at first and made me want to read this. After I read it, I wasn't sure if all the bits went together so I had a little listen on the link you posted (which by the way is incomplete, the youtube part has been taken off). After hearing you sing it, I really like it. You have a great voice as well, shame about the piano not being recordable!

Ohh mann, third stanza was hardcore. All was good,

that especially.

that was some seriously sweet-ness. i like the descriptions(: