She's so mean! Make her stop breaking innocent hearts! But you packed a lot of dramma in there so booya for you babycakes. ;P

WHY? This is a good story! Always post new chapters, because it doesn't matter if people don't really review, eventually you'll start to build up reviews, and then eventually many people will comment :) It just takes time... trust me. :D

Great chapter! I can't wait to find out if Trigger is Everitt, or what connection there is, if any :) Update soon! :D

Isabel

Ok, so I did like the second chapter, but I'm not exactly sure if someone would be so willing to let a stranger into their house, much less take them shopping, without really knowing them. It's nice that Juliet is being helpful, but I think an average person would ask a million questions and try to figure out the person before allowing them to camp out overnight at their house. I hope they find out where the boy is from and who he really is. I hope you continue with this story!

- BeautifulSacrifice

Nice story you have here. The first chapter was interesting, especially the dream she had. You put a lot of details in this, which I personally think most people struggle with, but perhaps, and I'm surprised I'm saying this, but you might have put in too much detail. You don't need to explain every little thing, just give us the gist of it and we'll be fine. Oh, and numbers less than ten are written out... Sorry, you used some numbers like 4 and stuff in the first chapter and it bugged me a little, but I'll admit I'm a little picky. Off to read the next chapter! :D

- beautifulsacrifice

This is so interesting! OMG, you HAVE to update this soon! :D