At the end I felt like it should be "Love, Us" 'cause that's how you would sign a card. Also, that didn't seem like a condolence which threw me off considering the beginning of the piece... to me a condolence is to people who are still alive and the card on those flowers seemed to be addressed to the person who died.

I also didn't get the whole euphoric thing.. why would they be euphoric?

I did like the format here. I especially liked the way you did the whole daughter and father thing. That was an interesting way to phrase it that worked really well.

I also liked the cookie-cutter part. That was a really great word to describe condolences.

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This is really sad, definitely not where I thought this poem was going.

I love the "cookie-cutter" line. This is really beautiful.

Also, if this is true, I am really sorry about your loss.

Keep writing, you have a knack for it.

- Guy

really like this one too.