I like the use of cause and effect because it is a hundred percent true that love changes who you are. I also liked how the story starts off dark but then becomes happy because it changes just as their love changed for each other. This review is for the Review Marathon which is linked on my profile.

really really like it! think its a great piece of work!

amazing:D

kind of strangely cliche with a mediocre timeline

but excellent descriptions, really. you are an artist