I enjoy the fact that you can use words in a song such as (gaseous ethanol) and make them work.

I think this is one of the most honest pieces you have written yet, if it is indeed about yourself. It's full of raw emotions and I enjoy that. It touched me and made me want to not pity myself.

(I'm feeling every negative emotion I resent,

I'm drowning in this barrel of self-pity.

Can't believe I've sunk this low.

Can't believe I can't let a damn thing go!)

I'm actually making up my own rythem for it in my head so that I can sing it when I'm feeling down lol.

Great job, buddy! Loved it!

kind of weird for a song.

what kind of genre did you have in mind?