Creepy! I like it, though!

i like how this story leaves you in suspense and the plot is very intriguing but... you may need to edit and fix some of the grammatical mistakes because they can make a story seem childish.

but please please keep going because i really want to find out what happens!

Gez! You write so dramatically. I love it!

Whoa, that was great. It was scary, but great. I can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep it up!