Hi just read it and it made me laugh! It's really great and I can't think of how it could be improved!

Great poem, though it seems a bit too strong for the queesy!

Laughter is awesome. And so is this x]

That was fantastic,you have a real talent for this. Congragulations on this fantasic, hilarious artwork of funniness.

Creative! I liked it lots! :D

This seems like a super dull "review" but that cracked me up. "JUST KIDDING!" Oh goodness. "My favorite thing in the whole world is poop." I loved it! You really tied it together really well. Good job.