|Reviews for Looking|
| Evilives 2/12/11 . chapter 2
Here at last!
Stalker (you've made it a name) here is actually more endearing than creepy. I love this POV...
I could SEE the Stalker's smile at the end!
| SargentLooneyPencil 2/5/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful... it's the only word i can use to describe this poem
| Dramira 1/29/11 . chapter 1
This is really well done. I like the part "like damp velvet brushing against my skin" very much!
| Evilives 1/28/11 . chapter 1
I like the stream of consciouness...and how he/she switches between being nervous and eager.
Would a continuation be too much to ask? :/
| sarcasmalchemist 1/28/11 . chapter 1
I love the way you describe anxiety. "Like damp velvet" was my favorite simile