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Evilives 2/12/11 . chapter 2Here at last! Stalker (you've made it a name) here is actually more endearing than creepy. I love this POV... I could SEE the Stalker's smile at the end! |
SargentLooneyPencil 2/5/11 . chapter 1Beautiful... it's the only word i can use to describe this poem |
Dramira 1/29/11 . chapter 1This is really well done. I like the part "like damp velvet brushing against my skin" very much! |
Evilives 1/28/11 . chapter 1I like the stream of consciouness...and how he/she switches between being nervous and eager. Would a continuation be too much to ask? :/ |
sarcasmalchemist 1/28/11 . chapter 1I love the way you describe anxiety. "Like damp velvet" was my favorite simile |