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| Reviews for The Undead |
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   AppleCrumble 11/18/12 . chapter 1Wow, I don't think I could write something this good in 7 minutes. Great poem! |
| Reel Wander 7/16/11 . chapter 1 7 minutes fierce! nice! |
| EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta 3/26/11 . chapter 1 This is damn good for somthing written in 7 minutes. I like it. |
| GoldieHotcakes 2/8/11 . chapter 1 This is pretty good. I'm a fan of fast-paced rhyming like this. It's a short, easy read. It's very good for something you had to write about in seven minutes. Sometimes the best works are produced under pressure! |
| Negasi 1/30/11 . chapter 1 I like it. The first four lines are my favourite, especially the bit about being damned to Hell, before they had a chance. It really portays a kind of sympathetic to the undead emotion, and I like that! On a constructive criticism note, a few of the lines feel a little too long when reading it in my head, but that could just be me! Either way I really like this, and I'm glad I took the time to read it! |
| cab fed hig 1/30/11 . chapter 1 fierce and terrible subject i think, but well-written. there are the mingled elements of grace and terror. |
| Irish toaster 1/30/11 . chapter 1 This was 'dead' good. Sorry for the pun. I liked this poem :) |
