The whole baby thing seemed to be talent care of too easily. Almost as if there wasn't even a need to put it in the story.

really good

um...for future reference, it's not rod iron. it's wrought iron.

do you have a beta? if so, get rid of them. if not, get one! and ck their references to make sure they know what they're doing! i say this because the 'rod iron' error isn't the only one in this story. trust me, 'flow' can be the difference between a 'good' writer and a 'great' writer. give it some thought, ok? good luck!

Wow! The story is amazing. I never read the first one, but I don't know how someone could hav compared it to Twililght. Not even close. The only thing that upset me was the way the story ended and that there wasn't a sequel. I would love to read more about Evie, Lucian and Lucifer. I am curious if they start a family and if and how she destroys Seth. There is so much room to continue on. I am curious to find out what ends up happening with Marcus and his pet. Ohhh...the possibilities are endless. Please if you ever find the time continue

This story if absolutely fabulous. I just finished reading, i started yesterday.

It would be cool if you wrote a story about Marcus and Elaine like how they met and to where they are now. they have been my favorite couple with the odd relationship they have and how it evolved

Did you repost this? I'm quite surprised it doesn't have more comments.

I quite enjoyed it.

WOW...

Hey i am in love with your story ITS AMAZING !

i love this story soo much i read it all the way through in like a day. eves character is soo strong. and the twists of the story, ohh its like a drug.

I really, really liked your story! I found it today and just couldn't quit reading till the end. I'm curious. Are you planning on writing a sequel or continuing what happens to Seth? It definitely seems open to that if you wanted to, but it also could stay this length. Once again, really loved the story! :)

Sorry I didn't review last time you posted a large glob (mass) of chapters. I read it, and then forgot to post. What do you mean this is the last chapter, doesn't she still have to save the world?

I really like how you have her reactions at the end. I think Lucifer might be a little bit too touchy feely.

Last comment, I felt like you should have spent more time with her in Seth's hold. I liked the escape, but that chapter just felt like the time was too rushed. You really needed to make time more drawn out.

i truly enjoy this story...cant wait to see what will happen with the baby and all

I likethis story it is interesting and different. When I started this story I was scarred iy was a twilight knockoff, but now that I have read it, it is better written with better characters who are dynamic and have many faults, Continue writing.

oh YEAH! this story has got me hooked right frm the strat! Evie totally rocks in a crazy rip your throat up way aha! great story plz plz plz update soon .