Please update soon! :D

woaah, now I know what that in the first chap was all about.

hmm, sam's a bit fucked up, but so is Jayden. Is james the only one who hasn't problems? Just curious :)

hopefully you'll update soon ;DD

Ha ha thanks for thé reply! I'm really glad i stumbled upon tour story! It just kerps getting more amazing thé more i read. I love original stories and emotional ones that truely make my heart ache. I can't wait for the next update. I hope things can get better for jay I don't like him being so sad or Sam for that matter in the last chapter.

Rae Ann

I don't think I need to wonder what kind of father Sam had...

Good chapter! Another interesting one. I'm glad we got to see James again since he's the first twin that Jay saw. I like him though I like Sam too.

I'm also glad that people are worried about Jay. I wish they would give him a break a little, but I think that's because we see things from his perspective and to him it's ok. However, I think if we saw it from their POV we would be cheering them on and wanting to shake Jay for letting himself be stepped on.

I really like how you have crafted Jay's thoughts though. He seems like he'd be an easy target for abuse, but that forgiving personality makes him rather endearing to me.

I'm interested to see where this story is going though. The summary made it sound like the twins would kind of play around with him, but I don't think that's going to happen now, maybe? Though I do wonder whether James will ever try to make a move on Jay. Anyway, I'm excited to see how the twins change his life. Good job!

Haven't heard from you in a while glad you're back great chapter i'll be waiting for the next one see you later.

Turquoise

Couldn't Jay explain it to Alana as easily as he explained it to James? She is his friend. And maybe she could see that she kind of flew off the handle a bit? Just saying, she wasn't letting him explain and he wasn't giving her the same benefit of the doubt he gave his mom when she asked what happened.

Your the reason I'm getting an account on this site! Please don't stop writing these stories! They are so amazing and wonderfully written! I'm absolutely in love with them. They're downright inspirational and intreeging and don't leave me hanging! I want to read oodles more.

This is most likely my favorite story on fictionpress so far. I like the characters so freaking much. Update sometime soon?

Whew! I'm all caught up. That was some scene! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Alana sees Jay's face ... and James, for that matter. Great updates!

DUNDUNDUN. I like. Good job with all the characters and such. You get me drooling at the descriptions of Sam and James. Dang, I wish there were hot guys like that at my school. -sob- Anyways, keep writing! And here's another story alert to add to your pile. :]

whoa i wasnt expecting sam to hit jay o.o i'd like more background info on like all the families :P good chapter though...a little short but hopefully they'll get longer? :D

Is Sebastian going to show up in later chapters or is he only going to be mentioned?

first of all i LOVE Pendulum and witchcraft is one of my fave songs

yay! another good fic, it's esier to find 'em!

hm will james get a bigger role? maybe even jays virginity? or does that belong to sam?