|Reviews for again,|
| rookbones 1/31/11 . chapter 1
It's simple yet the words hold such emotional content. It sound s lot like a song to me. You show brilliance in the use of imagery such as 'barely alive' and 'torn up' such that though these aren't uncommon phrases, they hold a fresh meaning here. There's a palpable atmosphere of hopelessness and yet everything from 'so if you come to me and I am shaking' feels like it is told in a plain-story format that to me, allows the intense feelings to seep through more apparently.