|Reviews for Away from Earth|
| Reel Wander 7/16/11 . chapter 1
Struggling to live your life,
Struggling to be you,
with your past, present, and tomorrow
the past is gone,
today is just today.
tomorrow is long way away
trying to forget, but could not
trying to hold on,
hold all the memories
and live your life
Nice Poem, full of emotion
| EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta 3/26/11 . chapter 1
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
| Ice Bubble 2/19/11 . chapter 1
So sad/sweet! Good job!
| MADdreamers 2/9/11 . chapter 1
The more I read the more I like. You're really talented. I like how you left the story open enough to have readers think of their situations because it makes us feel like we can somehow relate to your story.
| samhus 2/2/11 . chapter 1
Sad, but good. The last stanza was my favorite. Nice Job!
| Jamie Cooper 2/2/11 . chapter 1
i like this rhyming pattern and the mystery behind the poem. It gives you room to make up your own version of events and also keeps your mind reeling with questions! i really like this. Keep it up