I Love this! It has some sense of mystery to it! Very beautiful!

This poem was very well written. There were a few spelling errors, but overall this poem was wonderful. The imagery was depicted so beautifully and the poem flowed together. Great poem and thanks for sharing it!

Simply; lovely

Very well-written, although there are a few minor mistakes in it. It was deep and thought provoking. You used great details and it flowed together nicely. Overall, it was quite amazing.

.. it's so beautiful... i love it...

Hey! Another amazing piece of work there! It makes me think of the people I have lost which is great because then the poem has a more personal connection to the reader. The way you portray and lay out the poem is beautiful and a great credit to you! I do have one small thing though, nothing major! Just that you put two i's in ivory when there should be one! But that is nothing and it doesn't spoil this masterpiece which you should be proud of.