|Reviews for A Little Slice of Heaven|
| Micah7 10/4/11 . chapter 17
It just gets more and more angsty...
| Micah7 10/3/11 . chapter 16
Allen. He's sketchy as hell, thats for sure. I don't even feel like saying anything about him.
I laughed at Jaz kicking the wall. Sometimes I forget she's just 19. Her father's reaction to that was funny as hell. My parents are the exact same way. Temper tantrums are not allowed anywhere near them or in the house. Fortunately, when I'm upset, I'm the type to sit silently and stew over my anger. Anway...getting off subject...
Poor Jaz. I'd love to give her a hug. I like hugs when I'm upset from attractive people. lol
oh and of course I laughed (yes, I'm a goofball I laugh alot) at Jaz grumbling over the whole lack-of-penis thing. I imagined her with a dildo and smirked. That would certainly be interesting. The plot has definitely "thickened" from when I first started reading. It was so innocent in the beginning...now its...rough. /
| Micah7 10/3/11 . chapter 15
Okay...it's been a little minute since I've read this.
Coming back to this chapter in particular was quite a wake-up call. So, there was amazing times *wink, wink*, and there was...not-so-good times.
Georgia...was jealous? O_o? I keep getting surprised again, and again by this story! ) lol She is the last person I'd expect to feel that way! But hey Jaz is quite a catch so I'm surprised someone hasn't flirted w/ her before (in front of Georgie).
And, I think thats cool that Jaz know's another language fluently. She should speak it in the bedroom! ) well, actually I dont know if Greek sounds hot so...eh lol
And yes, the watch should be a red flag for Jaz...though that was kinda expected w/ the clothes and shoes.
Also, I HAD to laugh out loud at that "Medusa" bit about Jaz's hair. I've seen dreads gone wrong and laughed hard at the image. haha.
Oh, and Geo was right. Perhaps...Jaz makes her too comfortable. So much to say about that. Jaz's mom is right and usually I dont agree with the parents...but well, Jaz is going to be in for a rude awakening. It makes me sad, anxious...
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 13
There's alot to be said about this chapter. No, I dont have any thing snappy or witty to say.
Just that well, i guess it was a long time coming right.
Buuuuut, I thought "young dumb, and full of come" was hilarious. Sometimes, it seems like that couldn't be more true.
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 12
Daaaaaam. I'm sorry but Georgia is sooo henpecked its not even funny.
There's no way in hell. I'd take that. From anybody. But well, she's getting better. But she should've saw his crap coming a mile away. guys like him usually have red flags before you really get to know them right?
I mean, come onnnnnn. She takes waaaay too much of his crap. And you know i wanna say something else.
Sorry had to vent...
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 11
OMFG! Why did Jaz have to f*ck up epically? NOOOOOOOEEEES!
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 10
well...glad all that angst is over for now...
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 9
Damit. :/ not coooooooool.
And Georgie would freak out...ugh *heavy sigh*
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 8
lol at crotch rubbing.
sorry slight immature moment of mine. anyway I realllllly like this story. Just wanted to pass that along. Cant wait for the next chapter. gonna have to wait til tomorrow to read it. also, i lol'd at the 'real world, messing up childhood since there was a childhood.'
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 7
get em, Jaz, u sly devil you
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 6
Yep. I saw it comin'. Husband's a douche and probably a racist as well.
Also, just my personal opinion...Georgia made an EPIC mistake by letting a man provide for her and cut her off from the outside.
No, babe. Not good. A woman should be able to always provide for herself, man or no man.
It's always good ppl that get w/ a**holes. smh.
| Micah7 9/26/11 . chapter 5
This made me laugh "before you start pulling out your compass and protractor and the geometry of the game" XD
that was clever.
Also, fun and games aside, there seems to be a lot of casual body touching between Georgia and Jaz. I thought it was cute how she took the cig out of Jaz's mouth. lol
And I like the teens interactions with Georgia as well. Good chemistry. Ohhhh and gonna meet the husband next chapter! Kinda nervous.
| Micah7 9/25/11 . chapter 4
Jaz's friends are an interesting bunch.
Kinda like my frinds. I have an artsy type, a techie, a fire eater...basically they're all different. That Irish/Italian one sounds like she has a stick up her butt. If i was Georgia, I'd just ignore her.
| Micah7 9/25/11 . chapter 3
Wow...a little anxious at the thought of Georgia meeting Jaz's friends, not gonna lie.
| Micah7 9/25/11 . chapter 2
I'm with Jaz. i'm 19 also. At least I will be til next month.
But I dont think age should be as important as the bond you share with others. Nothing matters nearly as much.
In our society(and i suppose especially in Georgia's social enclave) the two of them would seem the most unlikliest of companions. I think they're good together.