|Reviews for A Little Slice of Heaven|
| Micah7 9/25/11 . chapter 1
well this was awfully interesting.
And spontaneous. I like that.
Also i was curious abt that bit w/ Jaz. She's blk, but she has blue eyes?
is she perhaps biracial?
i also wonder what sort of job/career Georgia's husband has.
I dont even kno him and he seems like a douche. oh well.
| Eskye 7/18/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story and the portrayal of the character's emotions. I looked on your deviantart and was wondering if you'd consider sketching Jaz and Georgia as well? I'm always curious to know if they way I imagine a character is the same as the way the author imagined them. I wish that there was more interaction with the friends near the end, though I suppose the lack was more due to the nature of their relationship with Jaz than oversight. Also, this story made me vow not to get into a relationship with a married woman. It is much too stressful, apparently.
| Kitmaro 6/30/11 . chapter 22
The curtain has fallen. Take a bow SL cuz it was another enjoyable story. Till next time.
| sirozorg 6/28/11 . chapter 22
Great Job, thx for this story, I love it! and I love the characters too _
| Just in cases 6/28/11 . chapter 22
As always, your work blows me away. Your characters just seem to get stronger and more developed with each story I read. The level of immense 'dislike' (I still think hate is too strong a word) that Allen stirs, is a clear testament to this.
The themes are always plausible and the actions of your characters are realistically stupid, if that makes sense. Nobody makes right decisions all the time and often there isn't a right decision; I think Georgie and Jazz illustrate this wonderfully.
Its always a little bitter-sweet when one of your stories ends, I mean, what am I supposed to read now? :)
I can't wait 'till your next story begins, keep up the awesome work.
| Night3603 6/28/11 . chapter 22
Once again you blow me away with your stories SL. Just the level of conflict and utter stupidity your charecters sometimes have is amazing lol. Ive been meaning to read this but i wanted to wait till you finished and here i am at 4 am just now finishing in one day. I loved this story and ill be looking forward to your new additions. BTW i wish you would do more kim possible stories. Its dying over there in .
| Apocalyptic-Wasp 6/27/11 . chapter 22
Ah yes, some good old lady loving :) That was definitely a great way to end the story. I can't wait for your future works!
| Katie 6/27/11 . chapter 22
loved this :) so happy allen is out of the picture
looking forward to your new works, especially please baby's sequel
| Miss Peachy 6/27/11 . chapter 22
I loved it! Such a great way to end a story, I'm so happy that Jaz and Georgia made up. And what a wonderful sex scene, my favorite of the whole story.
Good bye A Little Slice of Heaven! I can't wait for your future stories.
| The Eternally Heartbroken 6/27/11 . chapter 22
Very nice. And sweet. And no Allen. Yes.
| Bloody Violet Heart 6/27/11 . chapter 22
Enjoy it? I loved it! Your abilities never seize to amaze me. Entering one of your little worlds is like going to a fast food and realizing you are actually at a restaurant with a full course meal.
I do wonder though, how is possible for you, not only to overcome your writers block (if you get any) but to update weekly?
In any case, I was truly delighted. Now I can only hope you wont keep me waiting much longer for the sequel of "Please Baby".
| psychotic-cat17 6/27/11 . chapter 22
I really liked this epilogue. It bypasses the issue of Georgia's divorce while still touching on how it went, which I like. I was also really interest throughout the story if Georgia was ever going to open up her dream bakery and this sets up that she is well on her way to making that dream a reality. It doesn't seem as if Georgia and Jaz are exclusively living together yet, but they now have system that works with Jaz able to stay over night with Georgia without either being called home or being kicked out in a panic. Altogether, nicely tied up.
Thank you for writing another awesome story. I will be looking forward to your next creation.
| lloyd1191 6/27/11 . chapter 22
Hey Starving, another great story like always. There wasn't anything wrong to point out, except in the first or secong chapter. When Georgia said her age, I got confused, she should be 7 or 8 years younger than Jaz? That's the only thing that confused me. A thing I noticed is that one of the main characters is pretty dumb, but you put the reasons why, so I can't say anything about it. Overall, great story and I hope to read more from you. Good luck and until next time.
| SweetFangs 6/27/11 . chapter 1
Haha. Even at the end, they went at it like rabbits.
Still, I'm happy that Georgia finally got to open her own bakery.
Will there be a sequel? I want to see more of Jaz and Georgia even if there'll be drama and more problems ahead.
They're such a sweet couple now that they're together without any more obstacles in their way.
| Mere Nova 6/27/11 . chapter 22
*sniffle* Georgia's about to open her bakery...that's so awesome. Romance aside, I'm glad Georgia is doing something for herself, something that's hers and hers alone! That makes my day! Finally, Georgia has gained confidence and is living the dream. That's huge.
And Jaz and Georgia...*blush* aww
I can't believe my weekly addiction is over! I'm glad it ended happily. Thank you for writing this!