i'm in love.

and no, its not like the usual when i fall in love with your confident, gorgeous, drool-worthy, carved-out-by-michelangelo-himself male protagonists.

im in love with Naomi...not THAT type of love..geesh.

i just have to say i was literally cracking up the entire time she spoke...i like how you managed to showcase her quirkiness and capture her personality so well in just that chapter.

i loved it.

and im also glad thats its the start of verbal and witty banter between Artemis and Xavier... .TUN

and, i love how you're updating quite fast. hehe...but i also need my Brown Eyes dose of the day or else i'll go into withrawal and DIE!

do you want me to die?

mm...lets hope not

anyways, i love it and i cant wait to see what you come up with..tootles

Hope you update soon!

I think I like this so far.

I say I think because I'm not quite sure what to make of it. Which is the point, I bet. Both main characters have some obvious family crap going on (I'm guessing Artemis's mother recently died and Xavier's sister is in a coma or something) that we know nothing of, and I don't feel like I know them as much as the characters on your other stories, probably due to the third-person narrative.

For some reason, I can relate with Artemis situation. It sounds like she's going through some post-traumatic something. So I like her. It's Xavier that I'm yet to decide about.

By the way, Mr Lancaster is the awesomest. And Maya is cool too, I guess.

On other hand, I absolutely love your descriptions (as usual). And what we know of the plot keeps me intrigued, partly because it feels real.

So you're great, overall.

Can't wait for more!

Yay! Updates! This was great; I can't wait to read more! I'm looking forward to Artemis and Maya's partnership on the project and Naomi seems really interesting! Update soon!

OH and all of your chapters have a heading in the little drop-down menu, except for your Chapter 1. Might wanna fix that, or you might upset certain OCD perfectionists, no? ;)

YAY you decided to keep the party after all! -poke- -nudge- -shove- -obliterate-

Er, I mean, what party? HUH? I wonder what will ever go down during this gathering hooblah off epic proportions!

SO uh I dont think I caught any errors. BUT anywayszzsdressz.. um.. OMG U BETTER NOT PUT A KONFUSING EPILOGUE AGAIN :

I'm soo, so excited to see where you're leading this story. My mind is just assuming into all these different directions! haha. But I'm falling in love with the story altogether, more and more every chapter (; Please update soon please! (: haha.

Oohh. Why was he at a hospital? Volunteering ot does it have something to do with his sister? Gr. So many questions as the plot thickens!

sven. is he a swedish person? i ask as well, who is emily?

I'm glad Artemis wasn't paired with Xavier because that would've been too predictable. With Maya, it seems more interesting. Keep it coming. ;)

interesting... it's really difficult for me to work out your writing style and also your characters... it's all so complex, in a good way of course!

x UPDATE!

I really don't understand the relationship between Maya and Xavier. It's confusing.

This is bound to be interesting! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

please update again soon