|Reviews for Heartless BoyxBoy|
| Kio-chii 2/9/13 . chapter 29
Omg I ended hooked on this story and read it until 2 in the morning. Now I'm not one to cry but the ending made me bawl. You did a splended job with the sex chapter and the story. Although I still wish will had servived I like the way it went. Although personally I'd like to see a short of futur jace and an older Anna at wills grave or something. But that's just Me great job
| Dragondas 12/30/12 . chapter 29
It's not very often that I come across a story that makes me cry, so I must say you did a fantastic job with this! Now if you'll excuse me, I think I need to find a box of tissues.
| Guest 12/1/12 . chapter 29
Gooood ik crying so hard...will deserved to live!
| BlueBearPleaseSmile 11/25/12 . chapter 29
Oh, God. I am crying way to hard for characters that don't exist. These two boys manifested and grew in my heart to the point where I loved them. You ma'am have done the impossible, you made me cry over a simple story. I felt like I needed to tell you that. Keep writing my fabulous writer! I owe you for writing such a wonderful and heart breasking story!
| Yelena88 11/25/12 . chapter 1
"(3XY) equals 3XY", this is wrong. It's X to the sixth power, not to the second.
| Love U Te 11/22/12 . chapter 29
Absolutly loved it! The ending was pretty sad but overall it was amazing
| BeeTheMagicUser 11/16/12 . chapter 29
Wow...That's really my only reaction to this story. I read the entire thing in one sitting, and stayed up until past 2 in the morning to finish it. And I will admit, I bawled. Regardless of the tragic ending, the story was absolutely fantastic and one of the best stories I have read on this website, if not in my life. I will go cry myself to sleep now. Keep up the amazing work.
| BandNerd98 11/12/12 . chapter 29
Okay...I loved loved looooooved the story. But I began hating Jace since he kicked Will out after he confessed. And I'm going to admit not many stories make me cry but I cried my eyes out. I was hoping a heart transplant could save Will but no...he died. And grrrr I felt like hurting you but I mean come on? Who wants every single story ending the same way? Nobod that's who..I guess I should've seen that ending actually. You are an amazing writer and I just want to make sure you knew that (: and a random idea I had was maybe making an alternate ending if you wanted to..for the fainted heart people. But that is your choice (:
| love 11/6/12 . chapter 29
i loved your story! its sooo sad that willow died though...i wonder if jace will ever find another love...you should write a squeal to this story but obviously about jace.
| AlwaysWaitingForTheNextChapter 11/6/12 . chapter 29
Oh god... I'm in tears... that was amazingly awfully sad.
| PinkHart 11/2/12 . chapter 28
ok, so last night, I wasn't emotionally ready to provide a better comment other than to tell you that I was crying. which I was. a lot. I cried, and then I rolled into bed and then cried some more. I think if I had known someone would die I would have just stayed clear of it. but thats not something I can blame you for
And since we're on the topic of blaming, I want to blame Jace for... everything really. I cant I cant blame him for everything but I mostly do. Willow doesn't wish he never met Jace but I cant help but feel like his life really would have been better if he wasn't in love with him, at his every beck and call, to be outed by him, bullied all throughout high school...Jace never stuck up for Willow, for anything. He was so selfish and I was hopeful because I knew he couldn't be that way forever-but he pretty much was, he's not single minded for what? the final months of Willow's life? and it sucks. It sucks so bad (not your writing of course, which was amazing... just what Willow had to go through, always forgiving Jace and wanting him more than anything)
And then Willow died. He died when I hoped for a miracle, when I thought FOR SURE, that everything would be ok. Because he deserved it didnt he? the miracle?
OK, so Im trying not to cry again... but Its not really working. I loved this story though, I really, really did. But I hope I dont run into another one like yours. Crying until your throat swells makes it hard to breathe so, yeah
| PinkHart 11/2/12 . chapter 29
You honestly haveNO idea how much i'm crying right right now...
| ImADorkOfCourse 10/28/12 . chapter 29
Okay. FINALLY finished this, and i am speechless. well not really, but close enough. The ending was perfect. (not prefect in a "yay Willow died" kinda thing, but how it all fit together) and the last "It would be okay. Maybe not now, or soon, but eventually; it would be okay" Perfection. It's like this movie a saw (A Love to Hide) where the characters died and got shot and the one guy hanged himself, but the gay son was dying, and his homophobic father was holding his hand. I think it was beautiful how emotional Jace got in the last two chapters, and how he keeps the picture on his nightstand. It's like Willow spent all those years trying to hide his love for Jace, and in the end, after he's gone, Jace shows it. It truly was a beautiful story. So Thank You. Anne
| Bananafishh 9/10/12 . chapter 29
A handful - LESS than a handful of books have made me cry and this just joined them, although this definitely came top for most tears. Bravo. That was an AWESOME story. Brilliant.
| Phyuh 7/25/12 . chapter 29
Wow. I wish Willow didn't die but then kinda feel like it was right instead of them just living happily ever after. The ending in Jace's pov bought tears to my eyes really sad. Glad i came across this story one of the best ive read on here in a while enjoyed it.