Wow! What an amazing story! The concept was unusual and the writing was great. You definitely have a talent for writing.

eh, ima stop reading halfway through this come back to it though- the grammar and writing is good. but i'm not in the mood to follow the plots of more than three people. :3 this is a good story though, just thought i'd say that. my opinion matters, lawl.

Thank you for a wonderful journey.

It ended on a hopeful note and that's the best way to end this tale of humanity and love.

You really love your twists and turns, don't you?

Thank goodnes they are all so well written, darn it...who is the real monster now?

You are without hesitation a very talented writer, so glad I found this gem of a story.

I hope everything will turn out in the best possible way for Braedon, can't help it, he's just seems to be so deserving of a peaceful ending.

'And yet the strangeity was that the silence remained' could be written as 'And yet strangely the silence remained'

The plot thickens...not sure yet who's the protagonist or who's the antagonist but great writing.

In my last review I made a typo while suggesting that you made one...oh the irony.

Anyway...still loving the story.

Well...tha'ts a surprise. Hard to decide who to root for now.

Excellent twist this early in the story.

I hope you don't mind but I think 'She didn't need to turn and look to know that it was Victor come up behind her'

should be '...Victor who came up...'

On with the reading,

What a great written tale, the beginning is already captivating and it's a shame you don't have many reviews, yet, I hope.

The setting is mysterious and the conversations enticing.

The characters are intreguing to say the least and I hope but suspect the story will only get better.

Well done and I hope you'll honour your name and don't hestitate to write more.

You've got at least one fan.

Best wishes,

M

I've really enjoyed your story.

that was intense...and very good. it was a real good play on morality and just wow...i hope u will write more in the future (doesn't have to be this theme can be anything) because you are very talented.

For what its worth I think its brilliant. you've developed the plot well and the characters are really interesting. Its such a shame that no one else has reviewed this because its worth reading. I really do hope that they don't kill Braendon, and you should finish this off. It reads well, and I like your style of writing. ]