|Reviews for Of Hidden Wings|
| katmama 8/17/11 . chapter 16
Wow! What an amazing story! The concept was unusual and the writing was great. You definitely have a talent for writing.
| obscenecupcake 8/6/11 . chapter 4
eh, ima stop reading halfway through this come back to it though- the grammar and writing is good. but i'm not in the mood to follow the plots of more than three people. :3 this is a good story though, just thought i'd say that. my opinion matters, lawl.
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 16
Thank you for a wonderful journey.
It ended on a hopeful note and that's the best way to end this tale of humanity and love.
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 9
You really love your twists and turns, don't you?
Thank goodnes they are all so well written, darn it...who is the real monster now?
You are without hesitation a very talented writer, so glad I found this gem of a story.
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 5
I hope everything will turn out in the best possible way for Braedon, can't help it, he's just seems to be so deserving of a peaceful ending.
'And yet the strangeity was that the silence remained' could be written as 'And yet strangely the silence remained'
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 4
The plot thickens...not sure yet who's the protagonist or who's the antagonist but great writing.
In my last review I made a typo while suggesting that you made one...oh the irony.
Anyway...still loving the story.
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 3
Well...tha'ts a surprise. Hard to decide who to root for now.
Excellent twist this early in the story.
I hope you don't mind but I think 'She didn't need to turn and look to know that it was Victor come up behind her'
should be '...Victor who came up...'
On with the reading,
| shushumomo 7/29/11 . chapter 2
What a great written tale, the beginning is already captivating and it's a shame you don't have many reviews, yet, I hope.
The setting is mysterious and the conversations enticing.
The characters are intreguing to say the least and I hope but suspect the story will only get better.
Well done and I hope you'll honour your name and don't hestitate to write more.
You've got at least one fan.
| Marie 3/29/11 . chapter 16
I've really enjoyed your story.
| sw33tdaisie 3/22/11 . chapter 16
that was intense...and very good. it was a real good play on morality and just wow...i hope u will write more in the future (doesn't have to be this theme can be anything) because you are very talented.
| yesiamhuman 2/19/11 . chapter 7
For what its worth I think its brilliant. you've developed the plot well and the characters are really interesting. Its such a shame that no one else has reviewed this because its worth reading. I really do hope that they don't kill Braendon, and you should finish this off. It reads well, and I like your style of writing. ]