|Reviews for The Perfect Woman|
| smoke another grin 2/20/11 . chapter 1
It was all a great buildup, and I thought it was going deeper, hoping for an ending where you trash all those ideas of perfection, but the ending you had ruined it a bit for me. Because it meant that the poem wasn't ironic, it was really meant to be a description of the perfect woman? It was clever, and really good right until the last two lines. But ah well.
| Rhocar 2/6/11 . chapter 1
hey Yorik, are you trippin, she doesn't exist, but well summed up, don't forget perfect can also equal boring, fantastic piece though, now us women need to be one for a perfect man lol.
| Thoth Tarot 2/6/11 . chapter 1
and yet i know kung fu! its great! i love it! only one minor comment this line, My voice is like an orgasm in your ears. came a little too early on for me in the context of the words around it which was all disney like. i don't know if that was the purpose of it, but i would have like it a little latter with the rest of the more adult themes.