Both chapters were really good can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.

FINALLY ! i was starting to think you forgot about us.

okay first of all good job on another amazing TWO chapters. i love drunk Sue and papa bear David. i love part were they they were talking about the movie it really showed how a bond is building between then. and hot damn who know Sue had the type of body lol.

but the real icing on the cake was the ending smooch, smooch lol.

keep up the good writing and i just can't wait for more.

Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more fo it. Keep up the good work.

funny chapter. i love the part with the car. keep up the good work can't wait for more :)

love it has always

awesome story!

it reminds me of the book Beastly!

LOVE IT :DD

Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Also this chapter was quite entertaining. Keep up the good work.

if i were sue i would have tossed him in the street and let a truck run him over lol. but i like who the come to realize they need each other.

good chapter and can't wait for the next

aww that was real expected. what happens next? update! now!

crap i want to find out what happens next! :OOOO LOVE IT :D

Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.

this is amazing, you really make you characters come to life. it is very romantic. you doing a great job can't wait for more so hurry up and get the next chapter up lol.

OMGGGGG I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINUEEEE! i may be your hugest fan. i don't care if others are commenting beccause I AM IN LOOOOOOOVEEEE with your story! hahahahaha i can't wait for the next chapter!

Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.