|Reviews for Armageddon|
| romaniac 7/11/12 . chapter 5
| pacesettergurl18 7/21/11 . chapter 3
I like it except you need to slow down. I had no idea what was going on in chapter 2. Where were they?
But all togther a goodish story
| UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND 2/16/11 . chapter 2
why would he just agree like that? I think you need a little more desciption of emotions in there. I was very disconneted from your characters, and maybe make the plot go a little slower. Its the second chapter, and you've already started a cataclysm, and even if it was supposed to be like that, the story itself seems a little rushed. Don't get me wrong, I really like it, but... it's not quite up-to-par with some of your other stories. Even if it's one of those "it's early in the story, it's going to get WAY better later" deals, it's still too rushed. The concept is interesting, the shimmery lights are mysterious in all the right ways, and they guy sounds SO evil! I can tell he's going to be an awesome villain. I'm sorry if this doesn't make sense, I'm just tired right now.
| Lain Alastair 2/11/11 . chapter 2
wow great story so far! :)