I liked the suspense, for this being so short you built it up well.
On the other hand, I didn't like how little background you had. You're just throwing us into this without any previous information about either the caller or Nathan. I actually think you could have made it more interesting and mounted the tension better if you had some more background.
Overall, really nice work.

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I especially liked the added detail in this story. It's one of your longer ones and I think that really was an advantage for you. Good job.

My only qualms with this particular legend is in Nathan's actions. Any normal person would have alerted the police about the calls, lol. Especially if he knew the person was stalking him. Maybe in future revisions you could have him taking more steps toward protecting himself. I really think it could help complete the story.

I really like this! Very creepy.

cool story!