So short and simple but equally brilliant. Its so beautiful and you get so much across in 9 lines. BRILLIANT!

Beautiful. You've put into words what's been on my mind for a long, long time.

nice ending line, but it self is an art form that you have written, i like it.

it is so simple yet so powerfull as if there is no words to describe how truly in love they are! it reminds me of the last few lines of my poem closer to you!