wow that was good. I had my mouth dropped open almost the whole time.

Lol. She's insane too in the first place then. It was just dormant until she met this Blain. Anyway, it's nicely written. I actually liked it. Obut I was missing some of the torturing parts. It would be better with those in. Anyway, can you review one of my story too? it's call the "Survival of the Fittest". Thanks. ;P

That was...utterly sick and amazing! I love horror, and this was perfect! Torment of the human body is such fun to write about, er, I didn't type that...Anyway, like I said before, utterly sick and amazing!

Bloody

Beautiful in a sick, twisted, morbid way. :D

It gave me chills, but also made me happy! XD

You are a very good writer, I highly enjoyed it.

Disgustingly morbid. I loved every bit of it.

Excellent writing. It's actually sort of scary how you could possibly come up with something like this.