I am glad this will be longer then two shots.

Yey! More than a two shot

I really enjoy this story. I hope it continues, but even if it doesn't it has been a worthwhile read.

I like that you kept us in dramatic suspense about Mercer. It's really not clear until the end if he really likes Kiernan or not. And I like your exploration of school politics, like when Kiernan has to sit with the girlfriends. I can see a lot of interesting places for this story to go if you do keep writing it.

the story is cute so far. i can't want to read the next chapter?

please please please finish this! im a huge fan of ur writing and this story, and i d really like to see this finished! it makes me sad when u start so many awesome stories but im afraid to read them cuz i see that they havent been updated for months and i might be left heartbroken with the story unfinished indefinitely :(

This is so cute! I feel sorry for Shin though.. kind of being pushed to the side by everyone :(

Ok. Man. You're a pretty damn good writer that manages to come up with non-cliche story lines. I find it refreshing to read slash where one side of the relationship isn't the girl.. He's fighting the label. What I like best though is that it's Kiernan that's being pursued. Normally the 'girl gay guy' is the one pining over the 'straight' jock, so that's pretty cool. You should keep writing... Please? :)

Yay! This story is absolutely amazing, and your writing style is excellent!

omg Please post the next chapter soon!

Uh... hi.

You're going to finish this, right? I'm asking because I was just looking *ahem* lurking on the Idea Opinion Thread and saw your post there about this story.

For one, it's a really interesting concept. So much slash (including what I write myself, admittedly) sets up one member of the relationship as the girl. It's cool to see a story actually targeted AGAINST this, like... so what if I'm not athletic or as tall as him? That doesn't make me a girl.

So, seriously, I'd enjoy reading more. And I think a lot of people would agree, considering you have thirty reviews for only two chapters! If provoked, I will resort to begging.

(Also, it turns out I've read a few of your other stories. You're really good at coming up with plots that aren't cliche. Very good writer- keep it up, I wouldn't be surprised to see you published in a few years)

I don't care if you are a 'big fat liar', I just need the next chapter for this! Lol, you better have it up soon or I may have to cry! your writing is amazing, and the plot is excellent! Please keep up the good effort! I shall wait for your return! :) thanks for this amazing story, once again!

wahh please finish this

This is actually a ch. one thing that I missed the first time reading:

"Where are you're books?"

RDH, what are you doing, man? Gawd.

very cute story! cant wait to read more _

can't wait to know what happens next