|Reviews for Quagmire|
| Reel Wander 7/16/11 . chapter 1
incorporating the words hmmm tough job
visiting the graveyard, and remembering a love one
| Lia Jenson 4/20/11 . chapter 1
Big words vivid images...all in all, lovely and sweet, if not a bit sad. Two virtual thumbs up!
| Whirlymerle 3/1/11 . chapter 1
Very cool! I like the idea of incorporating SAT words in a poem, as well as the content of the poem itself. I especially like the ending, which I thought was so sweet!
At times, I did find myself not so focused on the poem as much as attempting to figure out what the underlined words meant, lol.
| would you if you could 2/20/11 . chapter 1
Woah. This is sad, but also very well written. I'd say shits loads more, but I don't really read poetry, therefore it would just be a spiel of words that I somehow typed.
| Ice Bubble 2/15/11 . chapter 1
Aw. So sad. But I especially like it because, the poem itself helps with the meanings of the words. (context clues) Unlike with the other one, I could hardly understand it. Good Job! :) Good luck on your SATs!
| thursdays and rain 2/14/11 . chapter 1
I adore the rhyme since it adds a nice flow to the poem and none of it sounds forced at all and is done so effortlessly.. by the way, thanks for the review on one of my poems and happy v day to you