oh SAT

incorporating the words hmmm tough job

visiting the graveyard, and remembering a love one

Nice poem

Big words vivid images...all in all, lovely and sweet, if not a bit sad. Two virtual thumbs up!

Very cool! I like the idea of incorporating SAT words in a poem, as well as the content of the poem itself. I especially like the ending, which I thought was so sweet!

At times, I did find myself not so focused on the poem as much as attempting to figure out what the underlined words meant, lol.

Well done!

Merle

Woah. This is sad, but also very well written. I'd say shits loads more, but I don't really read poetry, therefore it would just be a spiel of words that I somehow typed.

Yeah.

(:

Aw. So sad. But I especially like it because, the poem itself helps with the meanings of the words. (context clues) Unlike with the other one, I could hardly understand it. Good Job! :) Good luck on your SATs!

I adore the rhyme since it adds a nice flow to the poem and none of it sounds forced at all and is done so effortlessly.. by the way, thanks for the review on one of my poems and happy v day to you