nice story although much abuse? nevertheless i'm glad there is a happy ending!

Awww, I loved this story. I am so glad that everything worked out for Abigail. She deserved everything happy and good that came to her in life. I hated that she could not have kids of her own, but I live DJ's logic behind it, he was a good man and very understanding! He is a truly rare character to hold. You are a wonderful writer. I was right there with each character in the story I could see them, feel them, touch them at each new chapter. Please keep writing!

The way you create your scenes and your characters is so engaging. It is easy to get lost, feeling that you are actually there.

Abigail's story proves again that you are not afraid to take us through the emotions and traumas that make your characters so real, and pull us in to their realities.

And through it all, we are better for having taken this journey with you. Thank you!

i love how you bring it full circle, Abigail deserved all the wonderful times after putting up with all that she did from her father.

And Betsy, how heartbreaking for her as well.

DJ is my hero as are his parents, and Rachel also grew on me after she accepted Abby.

thanks for the timeline as well, my friend.
and
i got to leave another review .
yay me.
hugs,
Margaret

Try putting it in chapter form not just one big thing

cute ending

OMG! I luvv this story! You have a great writting style.

I feel sso bad for Abigail ;(

Eww... I hope she doesn't fall in love with this guy or something cuz thats just nasty xD

the guy is like her dads age!

Very lovely.

I love the ending. "We're not to old to try for kids of our own." So funny. Great Story!

please tell me the sherrifs boy is in love with abagail and will get her the hell outta there.

sigh i just LOVE THIS STORY

omg get her out of there asap what are you thinking letting her live as a servant at least tho she doesnt sleep with him but crap get her out of there

i love abigail who i will call abby from now on

its looking like a good story altho she is going to get painfully abused already. but it will make her stronger if not kill her hope she never forgives her dad what a dick