This was actually very cute. An adorable little story. :) I acutally really like Raphael, based on this... I'm already planning on reading three other stories of yours: "A Fallen Angel" and "Vagabondage" and "Runners Avenue" - if you're writing is like this then I think I'll like it. :)

Really well-done. Ive been taking writing courses, so I've been more critical of stories lately, but I have no criticsm for this piece. :)

Very cute and romantic. I liked it very much