I loved it!

I enjoyed this story immensely.

What I didn't enjoy was you homophobic tendencies.

This was an absolutely fascinating story to read, so thank you for writing it. You know your characters very well, and they stuck to their roles in perfection. I would have liked this chapter to be either longer...such as their first few years of marriage, see how many years on life had changed him, and then the last two sections of this chapter spread into further chapters. I highly recommend that you try to get this story published!

awww I will miss this story

Wow. I really enjoyed this story. Really great writing here. I'd love to read a sequel

omg have you considered doing a sequel to this? when i finished your book yesterday, i was thinking i really wanted a sequel. but you didn't indicate any such plans and i couldnt think what you could write about. i mean, i loved the world you'd created, but i felt that was a good spot to end with those two. but anyway, what if you did something on his descendants? so somewhere along the way, they don't pass on the stories about their alien roots, maybe cos they don't believe. then out of the blue, the aliens land on earth and find them! (sorry, i cant remember how to spell the name of the empire.) you don't have to, of course. but if you do decide you're interested in continuing with this world, let me know so i can read any future sequel! xD

oh by the way, just a little tidbit: you wrote that he doesn't sweat cos he can control his body temperature. and at the time, it really made sense that humans can't control their temp, so they sweat. but i just remembered some stuff i learnt in biology two years ago: humans sweat in order to control their temperature. you don't have to change it, since this is mainly a romance story with a scifi setting, but if you're quite keen on the scifi bit, you might want to edit that.

hahaha whee! baby zack! really enjoyed this story :)

only complaint: you keep switching from his perspective to hers IN THE MIDDLE OF A SCENE. the transition's actually really good. it flows well. and i, personally, don't mind too much because they're two totally different genders so i've no trouble telling who has started narrating. but there's still this slight jerk where i have to re-orient myself without any warning whatsoever and look through someone else's eyes. the main problem is that you don't give a heads-up by adding a heading/ line in bold. if you intend to revise this, i'd suggest editing the switching of viewpoints to make it more presentable and easier to read. i suspect your readers will appreciate that. hope this feedback helps!

hahahaha i still dont like your writing style that much and i realised why: i personally prefer direct conversation, but you include mostly inner thoughts. anyway, this is still HILARIOUS and im enjoying it!

heh quite addictive. didn't really like the style of narration but the content is so interesting and the character so weird it's hilarious

lol

Seriously this story is too hilarious for words. I really am out of ways to tell you how much Im enjoying your writty little remarks and jokes. The face that her parents are assuming she's preggers...priceless. Wait a sec...she could be though... hmm... Please update SOON.

Yay! They FINALLY get together. It was a little clinical coming from Zack's POV but that understandable. I wouldve definitely have liked to have read it from Tessa's perspective.

What! Way to be selfish Tessa the man just saves your planet! The least she can do is "see if their compatible" hint hint. As you already know...I'm in love with this story

O.M.G. That was too awesome for words. I was actually picturing this Oval Office scuffle in my mind. And as usual very hilarious. If I was Tess, I'd be jealous too.