|Reviews for Dogwalking is no sport|
| InkWitch 2/25/11 . chapter 1
ah the things we do for love.
| Ed Harley 2/24/11 . chapter 1
Amusing story, concisely told, with excellent dialog. These were some good laugh lines: "not showing teeth, because that might be threatening; drooling over my slippered toes,
resist the silly impulse to sniff my hand."
I found two possible errors:
1) I'm trying to hard-sell him something- I'm trying too hard to sell him something?
2) if he was insomniac instead-if he was an insomniac instead?