Chapter 1- good start, i like it! You just need to check it for some mistakes, you use the word teached, but it should be taught.

I love your story :) and i love how you write *-*

Ps: Check ours out? /s/2903564/1/The_magic_of_my_life

I think there are some grammer and wrong words/tenses in here. It might just be my opinion or the way I write... :)

I am liking the story though. :)

There is something weird going on with your dialogue. Whenever a character starts speaking there are no " but two commas in front.

Example: ,,Kassandra go water the plants." said Chenoa.

Make sense?