|Reviews for Witch's Cape|
| Lizzieface 3/30/11 . chapter 1
Chapter 1- good start, i like it! You just need to check it for some mistakes, you use the word teached, but it should be taught.
| ViviandTina 3/30/11 . chapter 5
I love your story :) and i love how you write *-*
Ps: Check ours out? /s/2903564/1/The_magic_of_my_life
| Sasse1892 3/13/11 . chapter 4
I think there are some grammer and wrong words/tenses in here. It might just be my opinion or the way I write... :)
I am liking the story though. :)
| Sasse1892 3/13/11 . chapter 1
There is something weird going on with your dialogue. Whenever a character starts speaking there are no " but two commas in front.
Example: ,,Kassandra go water the plants." said Chenoa.