|Reviews for The First Were Wolf|
| Nintendo Fan 101 5/11/11 . chapter 1
Just continue the story! Although I'm sure this is the kind of thing that Peter Griffin from Family Guy would do.
| slave to the voices 4/17/11 . chapter 1
I'm gonna be serious for this review because I think it deserves it.
There were some areas that would have flowed better with some hard editing. I'm talking about cutting unnecessary words, looking for odd phrases (like "people that knew him most well"), and just general things that slow the read.
I think this story has great potential (which is difficult for me to say considering I would rather pluck every individual body hair than read another bad werewolf/vampire/zombie story).
Anyway, I will be looking forward to the next chapter.