Oh, this one's really good. It shows the conflict you have over making this difficult choice.

Beautiful! the story line is clear and the rhyme scheme is awesome. Really great job am lovin the rhythmn

I love this :) its got just enough rhyme to catch your eye but not be distracting and adds really great metaphor to the symmetry of the subject.

"I look at the others / And see jagged rocks / That would skewer me through / If i were to drop / I look back at this one / and see only smooth walls / Nothing to stab me / If I were to fall"

"I take a deep breath / And look up above / And take a running start / For this last leap of love"

purely awesome

I love how you explained this. Its 100% true. I love it. I've been there to. Great job!

Adding to C2

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