WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend?

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You could make your peice less confusing (There is a scar above my eye where the cat kissed me)

I am guessing you meant this (There is a scar above my eye where the cat scratched me)

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WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend? Other than that it was good.

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