|Reviews for We go on with our lives|
| Fate Retold 2/25/11 . chapter 1
Hands down, this is the best. Do I keep saying that lol? To me, what it said is basically no matter how hard life gets, life goes on. And we DO survive. Your poem was like watching the times changing and people changing, and every emotion that comes along with that. That's what I got out of it.
And at least your potery has meaning. I usually just end up throwing up my feelings all over my page, posting it, and walking away from the computer feeling better from venting so dang hard LOL. ;P
Anyway buddy, your poetry is getting better each time you post a new one. I can literally see you growing in your gift for rhyming here. I really wish I could write poetry like you do. :)
| Archia 2/25/11 . chapter 1
Everything in here generally happens to people, which is what I like about it. I also like how you started all the stanzas with the first same line. You didn't let me forget that line and its importance.