i honestly don't think tha song was innocent to begin with...

anyway, i think you did a nice job. the rhyming was great. ...and...know the song is stuck in my head.

"RING AROUND GROUND ZERO / POCKETS FULL OF DEAD HEREOS / EXPLOSION! / EXPLOSION! / WE ALL FALL DOWN!"

keep up th good work, you two.

pop song drug references win!

i absolutely love this, first time i've seen something in it's style.

ahahaha, the first line. THE FIRST LINE. god, i love this.

favouriting!

hahahahahahahahahahhahahaha.

The best part is that I could actually see P!nk singing this song.

this is so funny. haha classic drug references to a teeny bop love song. thanks for the great read.

Aww, no, your rhyming was great :]. The only time it really falls out is the "of" in line two. Other than that, I really like the nursery rhyme of it all. This was, of course, a perfect pick for what you did and I love the modernized tragedy of it.

That's probably a way more in-depth and philosophical review than you needed, but hey. C'est la vie. It was good. :]

Hahahaha this was hilarious! I can't wait for the next one :)

Mariah xoxo

This was hysterical. I laughed much at: He says "Baby, something's wrong"

I say "Well damn right, I just noticed that we don't have a bong."

You have the gift of rhythm, which is much more than I can say about my own poetic attempts. Kudos and can't wait for the next part :]

I love the wa you explained The Genitalia Project. :D It's quite accurate! From one highschool girl in a rural area of eastern Minnesota to another, THIS IS GONNA BE SWELL. :D