Reviews for Drunk Text
neo-chan 4/16/11 . chapter 5
I'm in love with this fic and I'm in love with Gunnar! I don't know why but everything you've made him is just awesome. I stumbled upon this fic randomly and I'm glad I did, because it's one of the best I've read recently. I can picture it as a movie in my head as I read it, which is amazing.

Anyhow, I'm on my way to ranting so I'm just going to cut it short and say: Good job and I eagerly await the next chapter!
Satellite-Princess 4/13/11 . chapter 5
Oh hot...Im really liking this stroy

Gunner and Vance are really hot together

Uodate soon
Esquirella 4/13/11 . chapter 5
I like how Gunnar doesn't even realize how much he's turning into one of the girls he used to screw. Nice update!
EyeLuvEminem 4/13/11 . chapter 5
Finally he shows up! I was starting to wonder when he was going to pop up! Gunnar is so full of himself. Haha. I love it :) Please update soon.
MyLifeSoundtrack 4/13/11 . chapter 5
I love you, you evil writing genius. Just thought I'd let you know that first and foremost.

Jon and Cara are really cute and usually don't even take notice of the Hetero pairing but I couldn't not take notice to them. Seriously, they're a cute couple, even their friendship with Gunnar is cute.

And God! You had me on the edge of my seat waiting for the moment when Vance would finally show up. Dear Lord, you never cease to amaze me. I love Gunnar so very much and he makes me cackle in my seat with glee. I think i loved him the most when he was he was dead bored at the poetry slam. Oh, and then I loved him even more at the party.

He's so gay and in denial. I love it. Hells yea he and Brendan are peas in a pod. They should be best and form a "we were fucked over by our bi-curiosities" club. I think others would follow.

I think I could fall for Vance... he actually sounds like a hottie and he knows how to tame a beast. I love it.

Anyway, I won't bore you with anymore of my rambling. Let me just say that I love this story, it's characters, it's plot, and everything in between. And you! Almost forgot about you hahahaha. But yes, I loved the update and can't wait for the next one my writing friend!

Fucking A-M-A-Zing chapter!
aqua blue is blue 4/12/11 . chapter 4
Three words:

LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Update soon please :)
MyLifeSoundtrack 4/8/11 . chapter 4
OMG! I love Gunnar so much. He's such a bowl of mixed feelings and signals and it all delights me so. I really, really, love stories like this, have I told you that my dear? A moody Gunnar is certainly a plus. And Gunnar is totally reminding me of Brendan at the moment what with the confusion and being all popular and then succumbing to a man... drool. I love him.

But, is it wrong of me if I want him to suffer? Is it? Because I really kind of want Vance to knock him off of his high horse and then I kind of want the same thing to happen to Vance.

And I love Jon with his hipster glasses. I swear, I laughed so hard throughout the duration of this story. I couldn't wipe the smile off of my face. Jon is awesome as both a friend and a roomy.

God I love this story so much and I'm so happy to see an update. And- OH! The part before Gunnar left Vances apartment... superb! I have a thing for guys still feeling other guys inside of them and you drew out my inner kink. Seriously.

The Shout out to me made me blush and then it made me deliriously happy because I really wasn't expecting to see that. Thank you!

Nevertheless, I love all of your stories like a fat kid loves his bacon. Nuff said.

Upadte again soonish and I shall return!
Poptart Guava King 4/8/11 . chapter 4
Damn education and its obsession with eating people's faces! D: and yea I'll check out that other story. :3
just give me november 4/8/11 . chapter 4
ah, i love this. will definitely keep reading, if you keep updating.
Blank Papyrus 3/23/11 . chapter 3
Great story. It's well written and very interesting. Update soon. I want to see what happens
Poptart Guava King 3/18/11 . chapter 3
My life has been made. And I will never look at my brother's friend Vance the same way again. :D
Poptart Guava King 3/18/11 . chapter 1
YAY MADNESS. AND FINGERPAINT. finger-body painting. gotta do that.
MyLifeSoundtrack 3/18/11 . chapter 3
HOLY SHIT!

I don't even know where to start really because this chapter blew my fucking mind! No lie.

Hmm... well... we can start with the sex- that's always a good place to start. It was incredible! Le Gasp! It was written so well and realistically of someone's first time gettin' some anal action. Cereally, people these days down play first gay experiences and the gloss over the fact that it hurts and feels awkward at first. Anyway, I loved how you wrote out that entire scene and, dear god, it was hot! You, my friend, are a sex god!

I love how this is written in close third person. It shows your skill, your ultimate skill! I can't pull off a close third person because I always want people to know what everyone is thinking, even if it's just a little bit. Sigh... if only. Anyway, you're pro!

Lastly (although I feel like there're things I'm forgetting to throw in here but, well, next time), I love his borderline sociopathic thoughts. I also like his brother complex of sorts... makes things sexily complicated. But, back to his issues of love, I thoroughly enjoyed reading his thoughts on that. Hell, I love where all of this is going in general. I can't wait to see more of James, more of Vance, and certainly, more of Gunnar.

Update soon and I'll be waiting. More people need to get into this story.
papier.daffys 3/18/11 . chapter 3
Nice characterization of Gunnar in this chapter, especially the rumination on love at the end. It makes me more curious about Vance, curious and curiouser.
Esquirella 3/18/11 . chapter 3
Very cool story!
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