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Well this was more light than your other story. It did get sad there for a bit, but HAPPY ENDING! So that is good :)

Favorite thing was that the main character was a total ass and you made him likable. That's talent you know! And okay I lied, favorite thing was the sex. But that's obvious.

Awesome awesome awesome, can't say much more except AWESOME!

sorry I am useless for this one, ha! But please know I loved it.

Lovely, I rarely venture into this kind of style of writing, few can do it well - you can, and do. You've taken "the jerk" who is usually not portrayed beyond being the guy who breaks girls hearts, who a nice girl is better off without (so to say) and made him fall in love with a man who does the same to other men. Wonderfully iconic that. What's more you've made this "jerk" likeable, no loveable! He has friends, a life he's trying to fit into and find a place in. I liked that. No one is always all good, and no one always all bad either.

Oh, I love it! It's really funny, and I would read it again. You're grammar is all right. I encourage you to keep going.

GAWSH! THE WAY YOU WRITE IS TOO AMAZING! I love the way you convey the lust between these two, it's like Gunnar was an immoveable cocky object before being overtaken by an eager painter XD Can't wait to read moreee!

So awesome! This whole story was amazing! Hank you for some great laughs and great entertainment! I've never encountered a character like Gunnar before! Fucking brilliant!

This story was fantastic! I loved your characters-all of them! I'm so glad that it was complete, otherwise I would have died from the suspense. :P

I don't even know what to say about this book, really... It evoked emotions in me that a lot of romance books have not been able to achieve in a long time. They beauty in your writing.. It's kind of astounding, it made me smile and weep so often that sometimes I didn't know which one I was doing. Beautiful story, beautifully written.. Loved it so much.

SERIOUSLY. That was one of the MOST intense first chapters I've ever read in my life. My heart was pounding by the time I finishes it! I.. It's like my heart is at my throat and damn!
I just loved it c:

Thank you so much for this beautiful story. :D It's inspiring.

Yeah! I had a great time reading this. I'm slightly depressed from the rollercoaster you've sent me on, but hey, that's credit to you. Thanks for putting it online!

Haha, this was awesome. The present tense was a little irking, but I could get used to it. One thing that I was kind of confused by was the contradiction between his making lists when he's in a stressful situation, but then not being a planning ahead kind of guy. Otherwise, I had a good time reading. :) I'm definitely intrigued.

And don't worry about writing two stories at once. I'm very very bad-have about fifteen or so of various intended lengths going on right now, haha. You just keep away from that and you're good.

Loved this so much! (Especially that part when Vance threw Neil to the ground...and the sex scenes...) Keep up the great work:)
I'm off to check out your other stories now!
-creativesmarts (too lazy to login)

ok, so i love this story. i want a sequel.

Just heard about this story on Goodreads and can't wait to read it tonight.

So, this was the very first slash story I ever finished. And that's bad. Because it has been such a pain to find stories that come even close to being this wonderful.

I loved the humor and the style it was written with. The inner rants were great and realistic, at least to me.

What had me addicted were Gunnar and Vance and the way they tried to keep a hold of the ideas they had of themselves.

And as good as Art Criticism was I still think this should have one the SKoW award for best complete slash.