|Reviews for Sparrow Fire|
| SweetSarah2 3/11/11 . chapter 1
This was a really powerful poem. I liked the way you described things, like 'To your eyes -like dusty shop windows, the curtains closed.'
| Elber of Torou 3/2/11 . chapter 1
This is incredibly intense. It's great the way you get the reader caught up in the emotion of the character, then bring the reality out only in the last few lines.
| Archia 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Every line in here had so much description in it, it's so nice.