Thank you for all the reviews

I like this chapter for a cou

And this is where I become a satoru-san and Shizuoko-san shipper. I have to say, I don't quite understand the purpose of the scene where those boys jump out the window with the help of Shizuoko-san. I assume it as unimportant?

In the start it was a bit confusing, but it soon picked up. I loved the detail and the scene with the little boy, LOL.

I honestly cannot get enough. I'm thinking I may see a few future plot twists but I'm not sure, this story keeps me toes. I think that's what I enjoy the most about it, and that is maybe why I'm so into it. Everything is not always as it seems and Unlike most stories this story involves a lot of thinking, it needs you to be more involed in it then most.

Honedtly grading on a scale from 1-10 I give it a 9.2 and I believe you know why I did. _

Did you simply make the last chapter update longer?
I look forward to the next chapter.

I'm ashamed to say so, but I don't understand that last part.

So because he existed for a week that's his time slot so by the end of the week that'd be it and he'd disappear, but why forever?

I don't understand. But I think my interpretation is wrong ;

And by the way, worst cliff hanger yet! It seems you enjoy doing this to people. I was already worried about Midori-chan, then Sabrina, and now Satoru-kun...

Why...

However, great chapter so far

I really like the way you write. It's so thoughtful and interesting. This story seems really interesting. And the personat the beginning was interesting too. Is he some type of experiment gone wrong? Anyway, I really like this story. Update soon!

Sabrina Hafrem. She speaks truth despite the pain it brings. Still burning the book is a little harsh... And now I know why I always thought Midori-chan was special. I have hopes for Kiyomi-chan; She will pull through. Hopefully.

Introduction of new character...

DArk.

For some reason, now I imagine Satoru san with a monocle and a magnifying glass...

*clap clap clap*

Midori! Midori! And she has a cute bow, too. I like the combination of orange and green, too.

Professional-

If this is the last update for chapter 3, it seems a bit short, but I understand if not many occurrences happen in this chapter.

Nice scene towards the end and Satoru-san seems to be slightly manipulative when you think about it... Overall, nicely done.

Thanks for the updayto!

Plus I like the chapter title.

This one feels like a filler chapter (especially compared to the ginormous last one), but that's okay.

I like the fact that she didn't completely recognize him from afar. I think that's what happens to most people who see a friend in the distance. Even me, I have to scan for hair color and style first.

Loved this chapter too! I especially like how you characterize Shizuko. She's really a character that a lot of people can identify with (I am also an introvert).

There are a few typos and grammar slips here and there, but it must be exhausting to proofread something this long. None of the mistakes are so glaring to detract from the story.

Oh, but I did have a problem with the huge flashback paragraph. It was somewhat difficult for me to read and keep track of. I kept losing my place!

Wow, this is amazing! It reads like professional novel!

The beginning is especially surreal. I loved all your descriptions.

Also, I feel proud to know what "androphobia" means. Fear of men, right?

I like the guy's attitude. I liked the way you're developing his character. At this rate, I might check Fiction Press every hour I'm home! ('')