This was so adorable! I really like how you wrote this poem for your son. It really added the emotional connection. Great job!

This is so wonderful and so precious. It really made me smile. What thoughts a parent has, I really wonder. Great job!

I love this, the feeling in the words and your word choice is obvious to all. Your son is very lucky to have someone write something like this for them.

This is a wonderful poem. I love the imagery, and diction you included. Also, I could feel the love in the words you wrote, and that makes me smile. I'm sure when your son gets older and reads this poem, it'll make him smile too. (:

Excellent job! Keep it up, and more importantly,keep writing! (:

it's so sweet, everybody wants their childs grow up to be great

This is brilliant :) I love how this has such a cheerful feeling to it, and your use of language is lovely.