|Reviews for holding hands|
| rust phoenix 3/3/11 . chapter 1
Very sweet poem. I like how descriptive it is, and how real and relatable the feeling is.
| SomeRandomScribbles 3/1/11 . chapter 1
I like the relaxed feeling to your writing :) Your use of language is really good, and I like how you use only a few details to describe a person. I personally prefer punctuation and capital letters in poems, but maybe that's just me :) Great piece!